...gets a bit overbearing. I forgot to mention you can leave off the 'he said/she said' bit off completely in some cases. (I try not to do it for long bits of dialogue, though, since the reader can lose focus on who is saying what.)
I find these interesting, because I'm curious to see how my techniques and approaches differ from others'.
I'm sure I have a demon that would like to be the tight spot that antichrist is in. And Bel is rather fond of your demonic rebound phase. Maybe I could convince his better half it would be a good idea. You know. For 'charity'. :D
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Date: 2006-11-03 06:43 pm (UTC)"Really?" she asked.
"Huh," he stated.
...gets a bit overbearing. I forgot to mention you can leave off the 'he said/she said' bit off completely in some cases. (I try not to do it for long bits of dialogue, though, since the reader can lose focus on who is saying what.)
I find these interesting, because I'm curious to see how my techniques and approaches differ from others'.
I'm sure I have a demon that would like to be the tight spot that antichrist is in. And Bel is rather fond of your demonic rebound phase. Maybe I could convince his better half it would be a good idea. You know. For 'charity'. :D